wojiushini666 发表于 2021-11-21 22:35   全显示 1楼
说实话，这个小说前六章还是很不错的。自从第七章碰到混子的情节开始，这个小说的写实风格就跑偏了。本身是个很好的淫妻文，一下子就被带沟里去了。情节和以前的六章迥异，而且转变的让人难以接受。其实完全可以顺着一到六章的脉络，写一篇深入细致的淫妻文，深挖老婆以前的性史，就已经是很成功了，何必又旁逸斜出的和混子打交道呢。真是让人叹息啊，好好的小说真是毁了。
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