haha512 发表于 2010-6-24 18:57   全显示 1楼
早就见过这篇文章了，起初以为就是加入绳缚元素的手枪文而已。看到这两章，觉得是不是还有一些不错的构思要出来啊。期待啊。现在武侠文能看的已经不多了。希望大大加入一些政治，武林门派等斗争因素。还有，貌似作者还在尝试加入绿帽元素。既然加了，不妨就把人物心理写的更细腻点。不要都是被强奸的。一点想法，请大大考虑。
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